Candid

by mossgirl19   Dec 28, 2017


Art is born within the mesmerizing circles
of your dark eyes;
Perfection, captured,
in your deep charcoal pupils-

You said nothing compares to Urdu poetry.
But I say, "Nothing compares to the poetry
of your Pakistani eyes."

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  • 3 months ago

    by Matt Carroll

    Fantastic.

  • 5 months ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful!!!

  • 6 months ago

    by RustySoul

    Another beautiful write!! Congratulations on the win.

  • 6 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    Very nicely penned with tender words to flow
    along with it...well done and Congrats on the Win!!

  • 6 months ago

    by Milo

    Circles/pupils Poetry/Pakistani nice rythem. Well done. Im so late to posting comments, my bad. Ha.

    • 6 months ago

      by mossgirl19

      Thank you, Milo! Ha. No worries I appreciate your comments as always. :-)

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