Candid

by mossgirl19   Dec 28, 2017


Art is born within the mesmerizing circles
of your dark eyes;
Perfection, captured,
in your deep charcoal pupils-

You said nothing compares to Urdu poetry.
But I say, "Nothing compares to the poetry
of your Pakistani eyes."

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  • 6 months ago

    by Matt Carroll

    Fantastic.

  • 6 months ago

    by gumshuda

    Judging comment:

    Woah! Love and poetry are two things that mix really well and you have merged them in the most simple words in a beautiful, elegant way. It's good, short and crisp. It captures the emotions of a person and the descriptions of an artist in a mesmerising way. It plays mindfully between the candid nature of being an artist and how they spin words into honey for our hearts to taste. Beautiful.

  • 8 months ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful!!!

  • 9 months ago

    by RustySoul

    Another beautiful write!! Congratulations on the win.

  • 9 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    Very nicely penned with tender words to flow
    along with it...well done and Congrats on the Win!!

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