This is absolutely stunning and speaks is much to me.
1: Sometimes all we can do is reach out and take our pick in love especially if we feel it so strongly from within us.
2: I really loved this because it shows that not only did you feel strongly for him but you could love coming from him too which is a really lovely thing.. Because you saw from him you were meant to be together.
3: Beautiful imagery of his words engulfing you.
Words mean so much but actions do speak louder.
4: Then here we have it, the turn in the relationship where things turn sour and go horribly downhill, which is the story of my life. Lol
5: This ending is so powerful. It hurts when we give our everything to be met with nothing.
Wonderful portrayal of lost love with some brilliant lines
You were a craving I never knew I had
I mistook a shelf life for a life time
the base note of bitterness
the likes of you came with a n expiration date. Really strong powerful imagery