Comments : Hot drink

  • 6 years ago

    by Scott Cole

    Nice

  • 6 years ago

    by Thomas

    Alex,

    The brevity of this poem really works to its benefit- thoughts of another wrapped up nicely in few words, but all the more powerful in that aspect. Without need for any overwhelming sentiment, you manage to write a fantastic love poem through the fantastic comparison of the lovable nature of the subject with society's favorite morning beverage. Nicely done!

    • 6 years ago

      by Alex Penuelas

      Thank you!
      I tried to make it into a coffee mug shape (albeit failed epically lol )

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    This is adorable

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Alex you are such a lovely romantic. I really love the poems you are writing lately. I hope that whoever is the object of your love appreciates the romance in your soul. Best wishes Milly x