Comments : Ascending at last

  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    How beautiful

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Nams

    An inspirational piece of rhyming for you. The journey we make along that road, not easy but to be clean of the dirt its the only way
    Hope and warmth
    Michael :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A very sad piece with an element of hope at the end. Any piece that finishes with the word 'ascend' surely must have some hope in there somewhere!

    Take care, Naomi

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    This is beautifully done naomi xx

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Naomi loved the rhyme and metre of this and the soulful feeling of desolation. Best wishes .Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Nams, killer Write! I absolutely loved this.

  • 6 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Thank you all for the comments.