Comments : Ascending at last

  • 11 months ago

    by Mark

    How beautiful

  • 11 months ago

    by Michael


    An inspirational piece of rhyming for you. The journey we make along that road, not easy but to be clean of the dirt its the only way
    Hope and warmth
    Michael :)x

  • 11 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A very sad piece with an element of hope at the end. Any piece that finishes with the word 'ascend' surely must have some hope in there somewhere!

    Take care, Naomi

  • 11 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    This is beautifully done naomi xx

  • 11 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Naomi loved the rhyme and metre of this and the soulful feeling of desolation. Best wishes .Milly x

  • 11 months ago

    by Brenda

    Nams, killer Write! I absolutely loved this.

  • 10 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Thank you all for the comments.