Comments : along the Alver creek

  • 7 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Haha! Brilliant Mr D! I love the way you've expressed this story, it kept me captivated all the way through and I can clearly visualise the scene. Fab indeed :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 7 years ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    Haha. This has taken me to an adventure!!! Good job!

    --- MKKK

  • 7 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    I absolutely adored this Mr D, truly, it was like the adventure of Mr and Mrs D is poetry haha such a sweet and adventure filled piece possible another dream of yours maybe even hers though it could even be a reality if you have anything to do with it.
    Take care :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    Planks! ;0

    Brilliant and really enjoyed reading, had to keep scrolling with more intrigue and a great ending.
    Nice one Mr D :)

  • 7 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Absolutely loved this Mr D.

    The initial images you portrayed are amongst some of the things most special to me.

    Then oh my god what have you done!

    Not sure if this is real or fiction but it felt real when reading it.

    If so before going out again consider a proper canoe and research portage.

    Regards as always

    Craig

    • 7 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Thanks, Craig.
      This is a real story. It was quite scary and we honestly thought we were going to get marooned in sinking mud.
      You are right, more research will stop this from happening again.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben

    MIchael...I wish I had my nominations back :/ .....then again i wish i had a foot and a half thang ;) ...for you only lol!

    On a serious note (trying to keep my shit together) this is one of my favourite writes from you (straight into my favs) the tempo structure were spot on and the images were so vivid that i could literally smell those sausages on the breeze, you painted fine pictures with perfect phrasing and word choices .......I tilt my hat to thee old bean, magical!!

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Michael, I believe this is the first time we have shared the front page and it is a genuine honour to do so with you.

      A massive congratulations, good fellow

  • 7 years ago

    by Mark

    Great journey and win! Congrats

    • 7 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Thanks, Mark. A journey I'd rather not repeat! Lol