Comments : Aaaaaaah Chooooo

  • 3 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Loved this... Very topical :) Milly x

  • 3 months ago

    by Michael

    This is very well said with a dark-humoured touch.
    Nice one
    Michael :)

  • 3 months ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Saw this when you posted it on FB and nothing has ever been more relevant. More people need to read this. It reminds me of when people say to "just move on", when this country has so much work to do. The oppressors keep oppressing and many of us (myself and other white people) are complicit in it.

  • 3 months ago

    by naaz

    I just want to ask one thing...

    If I do an accident on the road, whom do you think people gonna blame for that, me or my car?

    I completely agree things are going wrong, I read another poem describing the same situation, but as maryanne said, "the oppressors keep oppressing."

    There are good people too, sir Larry, living in the same country America. Do you think they are involved or to do anything with that?

    Billions of dollars goes to charitable organizations too from the same country, but no one talks about that either.

    I apologize, if I have said something wrong...

  • 2 months ago

    by gumshuda

    Judging comment:

    A beautiful and funny piece of writing. I love how it is both hilarious and quite apt at the same time. I have always believed and felt that a piece of comical writing is hard to be felt, but you have done excellently.. Stills me smile thinking about it each time. Well done.