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Such beautiful things never last, it's a sad truth.
Beautiful poem, the whole thing made me tear, definetly deserves a nomination.
by CJ Maleney
I'm pleased you enjoyed it
by - Mr. Darcy
I liked this so much I decided to write a condensed version. Thanks for the inspiration.
Thank you I'll take a peek in a bit
This is a lovely poem, and the ironic end so sad, but true.
Well done fella, love this :)
Just a simple little write but I'm chuffed a few of you like it
The last line just stole my heart
I'm pleased you liked it and thank you for the nomination.
by Maple Tree
I love this poem- just love it
Thank you little Miss maple tree x
by Ben Pickard
So happy for you, Craig; fully deserved
Beautiful win Craig
by C Cattaway
Lovely. Well done x
by Meena Krish
In just five lines there is beauty, feelings and a little warmth
with an ending and a truth that all good things come to an end
and that applies in every aspect of life doesn't it....take care
Congrats on the Win :)
Thank you Meena.
Don't know what's happening but sometimes I don't see comment notifications.Sorry for via slow reply
This is a unique twist to a metaphor
that has been written of before,
I can't get enough of this poem
and just how beautiful it is.
There is so much beauty and sorrow
mixed within this rich little poem- its just wonderful!
Thank you so much for your comments and your vote. Means a lot and lovely to know who it was.