awesome poem! i loved it! keep in touch!
lexi lou

An excellent poem hun! I loved it! Keep it up and take care! :)

A person realizes that he/she has to change her way of appraoch to reach his/her goals. Works hard and tries her best... and finally gets her reward.

Thats what i got.. from this...

Great poem again.....
Take care,
Love Trincy.

What a beautiful analogy for life. :)

well i gota say i sorta understand it but i sorta dont its confusing but very very very good fantastic work!

excellent stucture I am of course jealous the imagery is still present with the spiritual reflection DEEP

The imagery and flow worked extremely well in synergy, the material you choose for the write is also very profound. I really enjoyed it.

Warmest regards,

Steve

Very good took me a minute to understand but i think its about accomplishing your goals very good.

Its kinda confusing for me. i understood some part s but owell. its good