When You Left

by Luvmeluvr   Oct 25, 2004

My life began the day I met you
It ended the day that you left
You'd stolen my heart without my consent
I should have accused you of theft

When you left me here all sad and alone
I couldn't help wondering why
You didn't care if I hurt myself
You didn't care if I'd die

We had such deep love, but where did it go?
When you left you hated me so
I knew this would happen and I was prepared
But I just couldn't handle you go

When you walked out the door, I waited for you
But you would never return
As I waited I held a lit lighter to my arm
And watched as my flesh slowly burned

You weren't coming back, so I picked up the gun
And held the barrel to my head
My life began the day I met you
And without you I'd rather be dead



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  • 14 years ago

    by .x.PorteR.x.

    Woah. I like this. It was good. Very well written..

    BTW, thanks for commenting on mah poem! You're a doll!

  • 14 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    Disturbing and sad. Good poem.

  • 14 years ago

    by Ashmore

    W..o.w. This is..wow! Awesome Job hun! Full of heartbreaking sadness. You conveyed the feelings in this poem very well. Great Work. Keep on writing! By the way, thanks for the comment on my poem, much appreciated :)

    Take Care, Jess xxxx

  • 14 years ago

    by SheiLa

    wow that's awesome.. keep writing dear~