What is the scene?

by Kelby   Nov 8, 2004


I haven't been writing long, but to me, this whole thing is something I enjoy more than anything. Getting to sit down, just being a kid, reading a couple things, from people like me, that feel the same way about things that I can't just talk to my friends about. This is one of my old ones. Sorry if you think it's kinda lame. Just a penny for your thoughts.
-Kelby

It's the moments when I'm with you,
And everything seems to fade.
No scene in backtracking,
On this routine day by day.

It's not the mushy moments,
That I'll never forget.
It's those crazy instincts
I got right before we'd kiss.

It's that time when you looked at me,
As if you could see right through.
It didn't take more than a simple hello,
To just wanting to be with you too.

It's not just our first kiss,
That really drove me in.
It wasn't the 2nd or 3rd.
It's that we were never pretend.

It's because I'm falling harder,
After each and every day.
I really don't want this feeling,
Just to end up going away.

So I'm asking you here and now,
Please just not to let go.
Because here in my heart,
You've already stichted and sewed.

So please baby, think about it,
And stop giving me heartache.
Because I'm not ready,
To be on another long break.

So if you want it to last,
Then let's stop with the fights,
And I know I start most of them,
But I want to sleep good tonight.

Now I seem to be falling
For the man of my dreams
Now it's your turn to show me,
What's your cliffhanging scene?

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    by Cassandra Wojick

    Hey, great job, really enjoyed it

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    by Keith

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    by Keith

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  • 12 years ago

    by Keith

    Good Poem! Very Well Written!