Comments : Are We Dancing Yet?

  • 13 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin 2

    Excellent poem... take care

  • 13 years ago

    by pinkalias

    wow, this was such an incredibly, no other word, pretty poem. the beginning was so lovely, it really did give me pleasent feeling as i read it.
    "Life wisped by me as a tear rolled down my face
    For once, I was smiling, I felt love in your embrace
    Careful, weaving movements as we tiptoed across the floor
    One step forward, one step back, every surface to explore"
    so beautiful, 'careful weaving moments' such a pretty line. and i have to admit when the lines came, "ill meet you in heaven" i had to hold back tears. such a lovely poem, the ending line at each stance, "are we dancing yet" and then at the end..."we were dancing" gives it a tragic but happy love story. i loved it, great job

  • 13 years ago

    by Hope

    That must have been one of the best poems i have ever read! What can i say? The story was so captivating and the structure was surely unique. Great, great, great job!!!!!! 5,5,5,5,5,5,5...

  • 13 years ago

    by Fall X Child

    its beautiful. i cried. i loved it

  • 13 years ago

    by TiFFanY

    soo goood i love it!!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Brittany

    wow, i love all of your poems but you truly out did yourself in this one. it was amazing! definitly a 5! i cried a bit even. please check out my poems and let me know what you think!
    xo-Brittany-ox

  • 13 years ago

    by Natalie coleman

    hay i like your poem it was realll good

  • 13 years ago

    by Aya

    wheeew, what a dramatic poem!

  • 13 years ago

    by Timothy L. Brown Jr.

    ilgfhsfohgosi!!! Sorry about that I couldnt seethe keyboard my eyes wasnt in focus yet from the tears I shead. That was so deep i had to read it twice

  • 12 years ago

    by Alissa

    beeeaaauuuttttiiiiffffuuuullllll =)

  • 12 years ago

    by Kendra

    Hey! OK, so thats like my favorite poem ever. It is wikid good, and I love it. I love all your poems, they are so beautiful. great job!

    ~Kendra~

  • 10 years ago

    by Cassandra Wojick

    I really liked it, good job

  • 8 years ago

    by amber

    Beautifully written :) i loved it. I could just see the clouds in Heaven and the angels. I could hear the fluttering of angel wings. I could hear the tear fall from your cheek. I could hear it and see it all. Good imagery. You're a very talented writer and I hope you continue to write :D
    Thanks
    ~*~Amber~*~