One Cut Too Deep...

by Knoxy   Dec 27, 2004


It's not going to be okay,
I'm scaring myself,
And someday,
I'm gonna end up cutting myself,
And going too deep...

But after that,
All this pain will go away,
Because I'll be fast asleep,
And never will I reawaken,
Because my life's been taken...

Its from all this b*ll shit
And I just cant take it anymore,
I've had enough,
Because I'm just so sore...

But in the beginning,
I was tough,
How could you do it?
You were slowly ripping me apart,
And I was too blind to notice,
This all happened at the start!

(C) Copyright Alana Knox 2004

*hey, thanx confusion! that was an awesome title, it suitz it sooo well! thanx hun! thanx for all the other suggestions*

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  • 10 years ago

    by DeadandBleeding

    That was really good, so powerful. Great job

  • 11 years ago

    by Andy loves Jesus

    I like your poems too :) there awesome. Keep on writing. Andy

  • 12 years ago

    by cody

    wow i realy like that, that was excellent

  • 12 years ago

    by bneathxmyxeyesx3

    Wow...That was a great poem. I write kindof like you, mostly about depression and love. Good job on this poem.. 5/5 !! :-)

    xoxoxox
    _Much_love_
    bneathxmyxeyesx3 or Brittany

  • 12 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey thanx Alissa, this meanz so much to me, I'm glad you liked it...keep on writing and take care!
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy