awww so sad and sweet altho im not sure if its meant to rhyme or not?
really good tho!
take care
xxxLoUxxx

Great! 5/5 for this one!

oh my gosh.. that was so good, but soo amazingly sad! i cried beacuse it reminded me of a recent loss...it was so beatiful. Thank you for sharing your gift with everyone, because the feeling i have right now is truly amazing.
Spectacular job.
5/5
**~~**
always,
cate

p.s is that a true story?

wow this is really sad...
is this true?

Wow that's amazing, so sad and heartbroken!!! I love it, you really got some feelings out in this one, keep it up!!! 5 for sure....

spirits among us. that is a mystical poem

Wow.. that was really good, brought a tear to my eye... Im sorry... If its true... xoxo.. 5/5

Sad But still Very Powerful. Good job...

wow, I'm so sorry. That is so deep, I've never had anything like that happen to me. Great poem though, it really brought me in, made me feel like I was there. 5/5

awww........Great poem! that made my eyes water*