Moonlight Sonata

by FTS Miles   Feb 16, 2005


Dark tones, brooding in submission,
Clarity of touch, staccato caresses
Of a high kind, rising, rising,
Softly, whispering, breathing into
Kisses of an internal kind, rising, rising,
Smote unto the breast, belly, womb
Feeling from the center of the soul,
Warmth, darkness, consumption of vibration,
Caressing, cooing, seducing promising
Rising, rising, inward, inward, through, through
A soft rumble of dark electricity
Brooding, rising, rising, submitting
To deep, resonating collapse.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Heathergirl

    great...

  • 19 years ago

    by pinkalias

    Very romantic. I liked your format and technique of writing in actions modified by broodened adjectives to increase the emotional depth of the piece. I admired the passion and romanticism you were able to display in it, and I loved the last line. It ended on a high and beautifulyl symbolized note with the reader in a delightful stance. I also loved the line,
    "A soft rumble of dark electricity"
    It's such a beautiful and descriptive symbol set in this mode of passion. Well done

  • 19 years ago

    by CinnamonTwirl

    great poem. 5's 2 u

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    beautiful! very very nice and neatly written!

    take care, 5! always believe in love

    dont forget to vote for my poem 50 reasons why i love you!

    ♥ amit ♥

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