Sun without the moon

by xxangelchicxx2000   Feb 21, 2005


Crying hard
in the dark
i feel alone
like sun without the moon
last time i saw you
you said, you would
always be here with me
in my heart
with my thoughts
but today i realized
that you are gone
i am free
i loved you so much
but not any more
you moved on
now i did too.

p.s. please comment on this. thank you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robyn Park

    A very meaningful and strong poem. I liked this one a lot. Keep up the good work.

  • 19 years ago

    by Erika

    I really like the "sun with no moon" phrase, great poem

  • 19 years ago

    by Amilo

    I liked this one the most out of all yours that I've read. The line breaks are positioned effectively, and it's quite simple, but heartfelt.

  • 19 years ago

    by Minkus

    I like the halting sort of style... good job once again!

  • 19 years ago

    by SweetDreamer

    Very sad, but honest and sincere. I like it, nice work!

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