Comments : Forever Misery

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    flawless flow skillful write honest emotion as for the content
    maybe you should not loose hope just yet about the reply.. may God bless you

  • 12 years ago

    by rachel

    hey this is reli gud, i love the line , sitting alone upon my grave, an xcellent poem worthy of a 5 well dun xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Jomar Bautista

    Short but still it was well written. The rhyme skim is really good. It flows very well. Great work!!!5/5=)

    Can u plz comment on my new poem tilted My Story Part II thanks!!!=)

  • 12 years ago

    by lisa marie

    yes but one thing. it is suppose to be short. it is a sonnet. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by NoPatience

    this poem was amazing. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Chad

    It is great.

  • 12 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    even though this is sad it is still so beautiful...I dont know how you do it.

  • 12 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    this poems very sad...very deep....definatly a 5/5 nd i hav no advise to give i found it flawless

  • 12 years ago

    by VampyraKi†

    that was very good

  • 12 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    Angels ignore me and god wont reply
    I love that part so much! great poem once again, amazing and it just blew me away...keep writing!

  • 12 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    excellent 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Amazing piece! It's honest and portrays the despair and tragedy within life! It's not your basic run of the mill "I hate my life cause it sucks" poem! You have a fascinating way with words! I usually pick out my favorite lines within a poem, but there are just too many in this one! Keep it up~Holly

  • 12 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Amazing piece! It's honest and portrays the despair and tragedy within life! It's not your basic run of the mill "I hate my life cause it sucks" poem! You have a fascinating way with words! I usually pick out my favorite lines within a poem, but there are just too many in this one! Keep it up~Holly