Thought of me

by deadnalone   Mar 20, 2005


This didn't turn out as well as I'd hoped, sorry.

Knowing that you thought of me,
Makes a smile dance on my lips,
I remember the feeling of your hands,
Held light upon my hips,

The times when you held me,
Keep playing in my head,
I want to be in your arms,
Forever, until I’m dead,

Your smile shines so brightly,
Reflects the light in your eyes,
When you wink at me,
I need not for a disguise,

I want your arms around me,
Cause it’s then that I feel love,
I feel like I’m special,
Held by an angel from above,

If I could only have you,
I would always smile,
To always be in your arms,
Or even just for a while,

Just knowing that you thought of me,
Puts this smile on my lips,
It makes me remember,
The feeling of your hands on my hips.

*All votes and comments greatly appreciated as always*

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Brilliant poem hun! Great great job! You rock girl! :-) Here for you xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    sweet poem hun, rocks :) keep ya head up, here if you need me or wana talk about anything. youll be ok, your strong ma lil potato:D

    luv ya, lucy lu -x-x-x-

  • 19 years ago

    by Aubrey

    wow!! that was soo amazing!!! <3 i loved it! great write!!!
    5/5
    xoxo
    Aubs

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Excellent poem, very well written. 5/5.
    Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit