Comments : In just one minute

  • 12 years ago

    by Michelle

    Wow. I really liked it. And ha, it rocked man. It took me one minute to read the poem. ^_^

    Keep 0n R0ckin'

    - MiMi

  • 12 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    AMAZING....I'm speecheless!!! I love the idea of the poem and you were right it took abut a minute to read....I love it and specially the ending....GREAT poem!!

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkLaces

    That Was An Amazing Poem,
    It's One Of My Favourite Poems I've Read On Here So Far.
    Thanks For Sharing It,
    One I Will Read Again And Again.

    Failed

  • 12 years ago

    by Erin

    hey i love ur poem it is great it did take me one minute to read...and it is true this world is s big and in just 1 minute over 5 lives can end, like right now im sure that a life has just ended or im sure someone is going to the hospital or im sure that someone is cutting themself or im sure that one is threatening to commit suicide while millions watch...this world is so predictable and you got it done with ur poem...nice job luv always Erin

  • 12 years ago

    by Andrea

    great poem!!

  • 12 years ago

    by JENNA

    its was good keep writin

  • 12 years ago

    by Katie Lynn

    wow, that was really good! keep up the awesome writing! 5/5

    ~Katie~

  • 12 years ago

    by hOlly

    LOVE IT!!=) lifes ugly side is sad. wish there was no such thing, but then what would have to compare to eh?=) great poem again! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by LostANDConfused

    It's awesome. I really liked it. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Areyoucrazy

    Awesome poem .... Its true .. life hasa very ugly side to it .. just many choose to ignore it act like everything is ok .. this was good .loved it
    keep on writting this is by far one of my favs
    ~*April~*

  • 12 years ago

    by FlowerThatDied

    Thts beautiful! Keep it up. Really good read.
    P.S plz comment on a few of mine

  • 12 years ago

    by tanya

    you're poem is great.my poems arent that good,but they come from inside.even if mine dont rhyme,in someway they have a meaning to me,and i hope,to other people aswell.
    keep up the good work =)

  • 12 years ago

    by Kaye

    I LOVE this poem. It just captures life's real aspect. Great job!! You're such a good writer, I'm jealous =P

  • 12 years ago

    by Theresa

    You write about the truth hun...everyone needs to hear it and you seem to have a good grasp on what is really there, what people like to pretend isnt real but is really hapening all around them...they secretly know it too...its good to have someone like you in this screwed up world that speaks the truth...

    <3 Moe

  • 12 years ago

    by Tia

    This is really good..i write poems but mine will never be as good as urs...when i read ur words it make me think about life...i want to thank you for that because i stop being less of a brat when i read one of ur poems..they are all really good

  • 11 years ago

    by .::Lovely*Letdown::.

    Holy crap...this poem is so true!!! It says so many things that really DO happen everyday and in just one minute!!! It's so sad...it's so true...GREAT JOB!!! 5/5