hey i love ur poem it is great it did take me one minute to read...and it is true this world is s big and in just 1 minute over 5 lives can end, like right now im sure that a life has just ended or im sure someone is going to the hospital or im sure that someone is cutting themself or im sure that one is threatening to commit suicide while millions watch...this world is so predictable and you got it done with ur poem...nice job luv always Erin
Awesome poem .... Its true .. life hasa very ugly side to it .. just many choose to ignore it act like everything is ok .. this was good .loved it
keep on writting this is by far one of my favs
You write about the truth hun...everyone needs to hear it and you seem to have a good grasp on what is really there, what people like to pretend isnt real but is really hapening all around them...they secretly know it too...its good to have someone like you in this screwed up world that speaks the truth...
This is really good..i write poems but mine will never be as good as urs...when i read ur words it make me think about life...i want to thank you for that because i stop being less of a brat when i read one of ur poems..they are all really good