Tears of my heart

by cooldude900   Mar 27, 2005


The day you walked away
making my heart to pay
you didn't turn back just once to see me
just a single tear came out of your eye
seeing you walking away made me to feel like to just die
if only you would have felt the love i felt for you
if you were me and i was you
then i think you would have felt that too
but thinking that is not so true
i wish i could have stopped you from going away
but i guess you didn't stop and didn't came back for me as you were my part
you didn't see the tears i cried from my heart

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    Great write. I really liked it. <3333

  • 18 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    :( Such a prettiful last line, James. It's so beautiful, short, but still so sad. I love it to pieces, it's really moving. Got my own little picture in my head of the scene..Brilliant poem hun :)

    Take good care of yourself,
    All my love,
    Laura.

  • 19 years ago

    by ~:.GodeSsOfTemPtati0n.:~

    well written.... liked it.... sad, but very beautiful... 5/5

    hope u pass by mine =) votes and comments much appreciated... thanx

  • 19 years ago

    by Megzzy

    Beautifully written, you have such talent, so wonderful its so great to read your poems..

  • 19 years ago

    by DarkOpex

    Its really good, very deep. Comes from the heart.

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