Comments : His Fault

  • 14 years ago

    by Shannon

    anyone can be a father. it takes a lot to be a dad. hopefully ur step will be a dad the way ur father should have been. btw u used the wrong "sore". it was really good tho

  • 13 years ago

    by Nanita

    I really understand how you feel. Mine is the same way (I think). He gets mad if I talk to someone outside my race but I don't worry about it any more because he can't tell me who I can love and who I can't.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenn

    Wow that was really beatiful. but at least you have a father.

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Awww hunni, its really good, its a shame you feel like that but the poem is awesome x x x x x x

  • 11 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Poem is a 5 as i vote it but the contents
    so sad i feel for you and big hug

    p.s. read my profile its for u today

  • 10 years ago

    by Melissa May

    My father is the same way, if not worse.
    I can totally relate to your poem, I love it.
    Keep writing,