I must say the poem is good but i don't agree with it. But, i'm here to discuss the poem not the topic. I really enjoyed it and thought it was well written, and i thought you did a wonderful job with the rhyming and the flow. Wow. Keep writing,
very thought provoking charcters in the poem the flow is flawless there is a profound meaning to this poem i would have to admit to being enchanted by the story line or imagery of a seemingly other time
This poem was really good. Thanks for the advice on my poem, took it into account but i won't change the poem thanks. Born2die is a jerk because he critisizes everything. He was being a bit hard on me even though i said it wasn't that good. Oh well everyone is allowed an opinion :)
Like it alot...
You deserved a 5 for this.
Great Idea, Great write..
All the best to you..
12 years ago
Good poem, i like it, heres food for thought,
Like you i dont beleave in god, but i do, infact, beleave in a higher power, but i dont fallow the bases of religion of any sort. Is it so hard to beleav that their is a higher power out there, be it god or zues or buda or even a devin spirit that man has not contenplated. I mean no insult, but the beleaf that we are our own coming from evolution is plain dulitry in my opinon. email me on this matter, discussin on personal beleafs may be fun with someone has smart has yourself.