Comments : Eclogue 001

  • 12 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    hey! this was great...brilliant...keep it up!! great work...take care ~much love~

    -brittnay- ((5/5))

  • its differnt..... well different to what i usually read
    but......
    really really good
    i liked it alot!
    >>5/5<<
    bec

  • 12 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    I must say the poem is good but i don't agree with it. But, i'm here to discuss the poem not the topic. I really enjoyed it and thought it was well written, and i thought you did a wonderful job with the rhyming and the flow. Wow. Keep writing,
    Satuxxa

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    very thought provoking charcters in the poem the flow is flawless there is a profound meaning to this poem i would have to admit to being enchanted by the story line or imagery of a seemingly other time

  • 12 years ago

    by Amanda

    This poem was really good. Thanks for the advice on my poem, took it into account but i won't change the poem thanks. Born2die is a jerk because he critisizes everything. He was being a bit hard on me even though i said it wasn't that good. Oh well everyone is allowed an opinion :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Amanda

    i used slang because it sounded better with the flow but never mind eh? I don't mind advice as long as it's not spiteful nitpicking. LOL :)

  • 12 years ago

    by cac123

    im so totally speechless, so original and so wonderful!! seriously i couldnt find a thing wrong with it!! wow...
    great write

  • 12 years ago

    by shannon

    hey.....really good! i gave it a 5/5...keep writing!
    -amanda

  • 12 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Very impressive!! I loved it and the words you used really captivate and keep you interested, well done...

  • 12 years ago

    by AJ

    Wow! That was amazing. It kept my attention all the way to the end. Great job. ~keep it up~ 6/5

    -no more

  • 12 years ago

    by Samantha

    I like your point of view. I believe you're completely right.

    Good way to word it. I'm impressed you even got a rhyme scheme out of such a "touchy" subject.

    Nice.

  • 12 years ago

    by VampyraKi†

    nice job could you help me to get good like you

  • 12 years ago

    by Hina

    I really enjoyed this..very inspirational, and kind of different. Haven't seen this style in a long time. Good Good job... I truly enjoy your writing...

    ~Hina

  • 12 years ago

    by Emilia

    5/5 for this one.. ´=) great work...!! keep it up.. please check out my poem "there goes my heart" thanks a lot... hugs

  • 12 years ago

    by Misstress

    Like it alot...
    You deserved a 5 for this.
    Great Idea, Great write..
    All the best to you..

  • 12 years ago

    by Clown

    Good poem, i like it, heres food for thought,
    Like you i dont beleave in god, but i do, infact, beleave in a higher power, but i dont fallow the bases of religion of any sort. Is it so hard to beleav that their is a higher power out there, be it god or zues or buda or even a devin spirit that man has not contenplated. I mean no insult, but the beleaf that we are our own coming from evolution is plain dulitry in my opinon. email me on this matter, discussin on personal beleafs may be fun with someone has smart has yourself.

  • 12 years ago

    by Daniel Ward

    the poem had a wonderful flow and rhyme scheme. it was an absolutley captivating poem, though i don't agree the Rien. take care, ciao~lyn

  • 12 years ago

    by chloe

    wow you are one truly talented poet! keep up the great work :D x

  • 12 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    I have no idea why the ratings on this poem are so low. The message itself was powerful; whether people believe in nihilism or not. You are an amazing poet; this poem is absolutely ingenious.

    5/5.

  • 12 years ago

    by KrIsTiNa

    i dont get it?