Comments : My MiXeD uP tHoUgHtS

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Such a good outlook on life. Very well done. I can relate I have made many mistakes and set many goals to improve my life. Keep it up! Take Care! Brooke 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by erotema

    there are some here who rate on content, and that is perfectly understandable. there are some who rate on structure, and that, too, is perfectly understandable. ill rate on both.

    content: 5/5 (thought it was excellent)
    structure: 3/5 (choppy. not unreadable, but choppy)
    overall: 4/5

    honestly, i thought the poem was wonderful. you have a lot of talent, and you should really consider just revising your work to give it that extra "something" to make it perfect. you are just a hair's breadth away from being masterful.

  • im only 14 uno :P but thanx again u will use your advice

  • i will use your advice*

  • 19 years ago

    by Sierra Rae

    That was so beautiful and inspiring...it was really positive and can make a person think...amazing girl like all your poems...ah another 5/5!!
    KIU
    luv yer gurl,
    --Sierra Rae

  • 19 years ago

    by AJ

    pretty good 5/5 ~keep it up~

    -no more

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Excellent write, very well done...
    5/5, take care, always believe in love, Amit

  • 19 years ago

    by Samantha

    Cool. Really interesting, and not what I'd expect from somebody your age.

    Nice work.

  • 19 years ago

    by Samantha

    (not that I can say much about the age thing...lol)