Nicely written, very well done.

5/5, Take Care, Always Believe in Love,

Nidhi's Love, Amit.

That was really really good. It gets into the mind of a girl perfectly!! You have great talent, keep on writing! Thanx for the comment!! Lotsa Luv, Gem xx

Very well written. Good job. Can't wait to read more. 5/5

-no more

Really good well done..keep it up...like to read more...

-TheGone

ok the main thing u have to work on is ur stanzas and rhyming scheem, u cant use the same word to rhyme. like here "The girl that sits by the window,staring blankly at the sky.
No one knows her pain.
No one knows her sorrow.
Her longing to be free,to jump from the window and fly into the sky.
" with sky it makes u sound like an ammiture poet

Thanks for your honesty ashley!

I'll work on that ^.^

This one is better than the other one, and I enjoyed this one because of the simple words used...it was a bit plain but still the meaning was deep and symbolic. For this one, work some more on the flow too, but otherwise I liked the idea and the poem. Keep writing,
Satuxxa

great job, ur a good writer and have talent, hope to read more of ur work soon!!

Cool poem keep uo the good work

Wow, that was really good. Nice write hun. >3jess

The flow was affected in places, but the raw emotion I found in this piece compensated for that.

Keep Writing
Nici

nice poem

excellent poem! i liked the flow you had and the content was beautiful. you could really feel the strife of this girl. keep it up!

~*LorienElf*~

well now i'm thinking of it I might of insulted you without meaning too, I said "you got some talent" i meant you got alot!! sorry thats just something said that came out wrong! newayz this is an awesome poem!! i loved it!! 5/5, keep up the awesome work!

Great poem! I loved it! It was deep. You have a lot of talent, dear. Keep writing!

-Ice

This is one of my favorite poems by you!
~Emmy

I love it, its really awsome