Comments : Ride

  • 12 years ago

    by erotema

    good job. i get so sick of people who dont rhyme anymore, so rhyming at ALL is great. the theme of the poem is wonderful. the rythym is good. youre a great writer.

  • 12 years ago

    by ** JeNa **

    great job, flows very nicely keep up the good work!! please rate and comment my 2 latest poems, thanks

  • 12 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Very unique and very well written. I really like that! 5/5 Take Care~ Brooke

  • 12 years ago

    by Amanda

    Hey what a great poem. I don't think it's bad at all. It was beautifully written with alot of feeling. I love the way it flows. Great stuff :)

  • 12 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    It's a fairly well written poem; I liked the confusion and fog in it. Sometimes I feel this way; I get more than I bargained for.

  • 12 years ago

    by Nici

    An interesting piece, that was a pleasure to read! It was diffentily unique, but in a good way.

    Keep Writing
    Nici

    PS Thanks for commenting on my poem, much appriecated. I will read some more of work tommoroow, but it is getting late now.

  • 12 years ago

    by Shawn Williams

    Excellent...I love how you never really come out and tell us what the ride is....drugs? Anyway it kept me interested until the end.

  • 12 years ago

    by Sean

    Seemless, kind of without time and then suddenly brings you to the realisation that it's not all so fun anymore.

    good piece.

  • 12 years ago

    by Shy

    Wow this is really good
    it's the first poem i have seen in this section that i have liked

  • 12 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    Great job!! i gotta say you did awesome! 5/5!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Carmen

    this is definently a great life poem. using an amusement park ride in your pov is a great way to explain a certain situation in life. great way of expressing it. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Emily

    Wow, this poem is leading to a sequel. I highly reccomend one!
    ~Emmy