Comments : Tomorrow Cries For Me

  • 12 years ago

    by Fighter

    wow...amazing!!!! beautifully written. keep up the great work and take care,
    Ariane
    -xXx-
    P.S. Welcome to the site :)

  • 12 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    Thank u, Fighter! I wasn't expecting such a good rating so soon. What's funny is that our names are almost exactly the same...Take care of yourself,too,aight? PEACE!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    this is such a great and amazing poem! has such a strong meaning to it. nice lil note at the end, nice to know someone cares! take care

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

  • 12 years ago

    by JJ

    great poem..keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by -Jay-

    Wikid poem! I love all your poems! Don't give up babe, keep writing your so awsome! I'm here if you need anything also :D

    XxX

  • 12 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    nothin's wrong jelly you're just hilarious hahahahahahhaha! Luv U
    SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Much! Peace, //ari\\

  • 12 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    So cool hon.

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Wow, this one got to me, especially the line: "Novacaine couldn't make me feel numb."

    keep up the good work.

    Steve

  • 12 years ago

    by Erica

    i added you as a favorite

  • 12 years ago

    by mkhoviyeun

    wow u're thoughtful.. great poem! 25/5!

  • 12 years ago

    by Torn

    That was awesome.. i really love that poem!!!
    no words ot describe it!! i foudn no flaws either!!!
    take care
    x x x x x x

  • 12 years ago

    by Atomic

    M'dear! That was wonderful!
    My favourite line:

    "Tomorrow cries for me
    Because I am unafraid
    To take my own life
    And bring the shame to my grave"

    Gawd! I heart you also!

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 12 years ago

    by *kAnDiE*

    I love this! i love all ur stuff! ur s0o talented!!! 5/5 i can totally relate too this!
    x0x0
    kandie!

  • 11 years ago

    by Katie

    Depression...Yea that pretty much sums me up

  • 11 years ago

    by crystal flaig

    Wow, keep up the good work it is good to know that there are other people out there. i added you to my faviortes

  • 11 years ago

    by mkml

    Deep, and has a true meaning, and a great message out to people who are thinking about suicide.

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by t. h a l l i d a y *

    Wow!! That was an amaziing poem!... I like cried and everything. This is exactly how i feel. I loved it. Your a great poet!! Keep it up!

    Tara

  • 11 years ago

    by Raven

    Great poem. Well written. It touches many hearts that are out there thinking about taking their own lives and I hope you've touched their hearts to think again about suicide.

  • I love ur poem i can relate && ur right about the whole suicide thing!
    thankz

  • 7 years ago

    by Marte

    You are amazing :)