Comments : God please, I write this to you

  • 12 years ago

    by IWroteYouAPoemOnMyWrist

    i really appreciate your comment ... thanks very much i liked this poem also .. sad tho... hope things get better if they arent already !!!! 5/5

    -much love for you sabrina

  • 12 years ago

    by Rebecca Morgan

    OMG that was breath taking and that's alot coming from me. WOW, don't even worry about this poem cause it is REALLY good. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Boycrazy

    i think that was an excellent poem and i might not know what your going threw but i think it might be serious

    keepup the goodwork!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Willow

    it was very good and u were really brave

  • 12 years ago

    by Polly

    this is really good and you totally should be proud of it. i wish that would happen to be but i guess nobody will ever understand! keep it up its really good
    Polly ~X~

  • 12 years ago

    by CynicxSincexBirth

    hey thats a really good poem. i wished my mom would do something like that. she keeps putting off me going to the therapist. and everytime i try to tell her i'm suicidal, she starts blaming herself and forgetting all of my problems. going on about how shes a bad mother, well hello its not helping if i'm cutting everynight and showing them off waiting for someone to help. and once i figured they weren't helping, i decided i should end it all, after i ran away and got caught, they still didn't see and so i tried suicide. three dang times. well, very nice poem. read some of mine if ya ever get bored.

  • 12 years ago

    by kitten

    love the poem i hope things get better for ya smart chose about life cause no matter how hard life gets u should never give up that chanse of life u only have one life to live and theres always ups and downs in life everyone gets them i hope u get better xoxo

  • 12 years ago

    by Rachele

    OMG this is soo good i love ir gr8 wokr 5/5 :D

  • 12 years ago

    by xfAdInGxaWaYx

    That was an awesome poem

  • 12 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    WOW, one of the best poems I have ever read, it almost made me cry. Very emotional and strongly written!!! I can really relate to this one, I'm dealing with the same feelings, I just can't reach out my hand for help....yet!!!
    Keep up the good work...

    *Hugs Sabrina*

  • 12 years ago

    by SuicidePrincess

    wow you are very talented great job

  • 12 years ago

    by xCezx

    hey u really don't need 2 change anythin on this poem! its excellent! 6/5 lol. if this is true, please talk to me coz ive been there! tiger_666999@hotmail.com. lv ya lots cez x x x

  • 12 years ago

    by prepkiller

    it was great keep up the great work i hope the best to you

  • 12 years ago

    by mosha

    i really liked it cuz itz almozt the zame thing that happend to me but i had my dads gun haha but even if life iz unfair there iz a reazon we are here it may take you a long time to figure out why you are here but killing yourezelf wont do any good juzt imagine the way your mom would feel zo take care

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsi

    Good Job, you have a great gift and don't waste it. Just remember that you have a lot of people here for you. Remember that, and if you ever feel like that again, think of everyone you'd hurt, you don't realize how many people care, until something happens. Keep up the great work!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    this poem is really good!!! did you really go through all of this...well if u did then we have alot in common...because i did too....

  • 12 years ago

    by LaShea

    i love it

  • 12 years ago

    by SaMiE

    This I have to say is one of the best poems I have ever heard!! Glad that you put down that knife gurl, I've been through the same thing b4,
    lataz

  • 12 years ago

    by Saliva t i o n x

    That poem has so much meaning.
    That's just a wonderful poem!
    Great job and keep up the good work.
    My best wishes.

    -Ces

  • 12 years ago

    by joaana

    your good and i hope you never think of doing something like that again and we all have our days but its worth holding on