Comments : America! What Will We Do?

  • 12 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    It's great to see some more poetry by you on here...since I haven't lately. And muh dear, I adore your talent. 5/5

    Love,
    Heather.

  • 12 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Beautifully written. Just beautiful.

    - Kal.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Becky, Truly a day we will never forget!! Great job. hugs, love, Ann

  • 12 years ago

    by Chasity

    GREAT JOB I THINK IT WAS REALLY GOOD FRIST I WOULD LIKE TO SAY THANKS ON YOUR COMMENT ON MINE I APPRECIATE IT . IT WAS REALLY STRONG AND I THINK MORE OF US POETS NEED TO WRITE MORE ABOUT WHAT HAS HAPPENED IN THE U.S. ONCE AGAIN GOOD JOB AND KEEP WRITING YOUR A WOUNDERFUL POET MUCH LOVE, CHAS!!!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Becky, I have so many tears in my eyes I can't begin to explain! September 11 was a heart breaking time for me as well although I was only in the fifth grade...Ever since I was about in 1st grade my parents taught me to love Gods people like he loves us..When i heard of all those people dieing my heart was right there..I felt like it was me being burned and fryed...I have wrote many poems about this tragic event too, but let me tell you Becky, I have never read one quite like this before..You have captured the moment and let us Americans know everything will be ok just keep our faith in God and keep our heads hanging high..that's exactly what I have been doing ever since that day! This was an amazing peice and you deserve so much credit for it!! I wish I could rate higher then a 5!
    Kind Regards,
    ~Chelsey~

  • 12 years ago

    by Treakle

    Such a good poem,
    thankyou so much for commenting on my poem, you really have made me think.
    This poem would make all americans proud i'm sure!
    xx

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    yes the poem hit the mark with patriotic passion and a faith that one nation under GOD will survive while expressing our love and sympathy for the victims... good job..another 5

  • 12 years ago

    by Gemma Sinead Hayward

    Would you say freedom fighters are cowards? After all, our terrorists are their freedom fighters. If you fought for your country, does that make you a coward? If you fight for freedom, are you guilty of cowardice?

    Raises many questions, and leaves no answers. I suppose we british do not share patriotism like you do, but nonetheless, I like poems that make me think. And even if I vehemently opposed the content, I cannot disregard the fact that it was wondefully written. Well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by Victoria

    Great poem and I dont think anyone will ever forget that day the power in this write was good and brought out a patriotic feeling keep it up!

    take care

  • 12 years ago

    by Marjan

    I liked the flow. really good job becky.