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by Becky drake
thank you for sharing, it puts a whole new perpestive on Fathers Day doesn't it. Love Becky
I found this poem a little uninspired...
didn't really like it, sorry..
I think it can be good if you work more with it, add a more obvious flow and such..
keep it up
by =)~ BJ ~(=
a poem doesnt have to have flow, u can use it to just get feelings out
by Hopeless Romantic
I LOVE IT!!! i want a baby :( im gonna adopt or something to get me one! :D i love ur work BJ. mwah. xxxx keep it up now onto ur last one. :D
this was good too. I liked it a lot...
by Sarah Ann
I thought this was excellent, as long as it is your feelings it is a masterpiece in my eyes. xxx
this was good...i think it needs more rhyming tho
nice feeling, but i have to agree with enslavement on this one...it does need a little work on the flow, but otherwise, good job!