Comments : To My Daddy

  • 12 years ago

    by Becky drake

    thank you for sharing, it puts a whole new perpestive on Fathers Day doesn't it. Love Becky

  • 12 years ago

    by EoB

    I found this poem a little uninspired...

    didn't really like it, sorry..

    I think it can be good if you work more with it, add a more obvious flow and such..

    keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by =)~ BJ ~(=

    a poem doesnt have to have flow, u can use it to just get feelings out

  • 12 years ago

    by Hopeless Romantic

    I LOVE IT!!! i want a baby :( im gonna adopt or something to get me one! :D i love ur work BJ. mwah. xxxx keep it up now onto ur last one. :D

  • 12 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    this was good too. I liked it a lot...

  • 12 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    I thought this was excellent, as long as it is your feelings it is a masterpiece in my eyes. xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Andrea

    this was good...i think it needs more rhyming tho

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashli

    nice feeling, but i have to agree with enslavement on this one...it does need a little work on the flow, but otherwise, good job!