oh darling, i fear clowns too...my bf just asked me why i did, your poem painted it wonderfully, i may just show it to him =) great job. 5/5...VERY original

<3 Heather.

Wow...Excellent poem...You should read the book "It" By Stephen King. Look into it, you may relate well. I never was scared of clowns till I read the book, but then again I never liked them either.

good writing the story was good it was interesting in a good way, liked the way you use words that good, it was a good poem

That was such a good poem and i liked it cause it was different.....not everyone writs about evil clowns! lol good job!

Very interesting. It really puts my fear into words. I just hate clowns! 5/5

You can really write dark poems. Keep it up. Another great poem I loved the creative idea of the clown! ~Brooke~

:'( I'm terrified of clowns...why did I read this???WHHHHHHHHHHHHHY

okay away from that melodrama. Great poem. You have an expert way of expressing your thoughts. I feel you are gifted. keep it up
~*Freak*~

awesome poem u have natural talent im not afraid of clowns but im taking a wild guess ur terrified of them
Dee

wow...what a unuque concept...a killer clown....

I like this part,
I hear the noise of its shoes,
the constant flap, flap, flapping,
right outside my bedroom door,
it starts rap, rap, rapping.

funny to think of a clown rapping....I also liked the rhyme sequence, it stayed constant...nice.

ok that was freakyish and scary but i loved it again...i like scary poems...ur good
5/5

always -angel-.

This is like a story I read by R.L.Stine...It's creepy and scary...

Hmm.. i dont get why people are so scared of clowns.. I think it's funny whatching them make a foul outta them selfs! They try to make jokes, but really there the joke!! Ahahaha!! great poem by the way!! Keep up the good work