Love's Promise Forever

by Prince Enigma   Jun 29, 2005


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Your kiss will last forever,
Your touch forever warm.
As you guide me to the sunlight,
And shield me from the storm.

You ease my pain and my soul,
You help give me the power to let go.
You give me shelter from the rain,
And help me see the light again..

When I need a shoulder, you are there.
When my heart is broken, you always care.
When I am lost or confused,
My right path you always seem to choose.

Forever takes me by the minute, while I’m here with you.
I’m falling even more in love, with everything you do.
There aren't enough hours, in each passing day,
To find all the words, I wish I could say.

I cannot repay you or even try,
I owe you for every time I have cried.
You made me smile when I was down,
Hopefully, you will always be around.

All I've ever wanted, I find in you,
No lies are told, these words are true.
Without you I would be consumed with my fears.
I wouldn't have anyone to wipe away my tears.

I have been in love before,
But nothing compares to this.
You've touched my heart and soul,
In places others have always missed.

It's a feeling of really knowing,
Our love is meant to be.
I know without a single doubt,
That God sent you to me.

Now promise me one thing,
That our love will stay forever strong,
That nothing will keep as apart,
Because this is where we belong...
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(Comment/Vote if you want, this poem is written by two, by me and a friend)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Beautiful poem!!! Absolutely loved it. Keep up the great work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Rashelle

    WOW, This was SO good and touching. Definitly 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Prince Enigma

    Never really thought of it that way, just use to comma's at the end always, good suggestion, will keep that in mind, thanks Natalie.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    "I have been in love before,
    But nothing compares to this.
    You've touched my heart and soul,
    In places others have always missed."

    That is my favorite stanza.

    I scrolled down before I read it and saw that you and someone else wrote this. Normally I think that a poem written by two people shows each individual style and can sometimes conflict with each other but I think you two put it together very nicely. The only suggestion I would make is to maybe drop all the commas... (I think) they take away from the flow as people tend to pause after commas. I don't feel that they are necessary, but it is your call. Nice write my friend! :) Take Care!

  • 18 years ago

    by your sweetest sin

    awww i liked it good work 5/5