Comments : Pretty Little Knife

  • 13 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    i love it! the positive out look of putting it away too! knowing thta you can live without it and that it's causeing harm to yourself thats wrong. glad to see a new one!!!!

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and special love~

  • 13 years ago

    by stephanie

    nice poem...5/5....plz comment on mine it would mean a lot...thanks

  • 13 years ago

    by brittany

    great wrk loved it

  • 13 years ago

    by Fighter

    excellent!!! keep up the amazing work!

  • 13 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Stay strong sweetie. This was a different sort of poem i'm used to reading, made me a tad sad :(
    I luvvoo hun,

    - Kals.

  • 13 years ago

    by ZOMGEMO

    awesome poem *thumbs up* this is really good...

    wish i could put the knife away... it just seems to call me back...

    anyways... could ya rate mine some day please... thanks...

    *..KimiC..* XxXo0oXxX

  • 13 years ago

    by Kailynn Makenna

    Hey great poem!! i loved it!! awesome job!


  • 13 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    this is a good poem and I like it!!

    Thanks for you comment/Rate


  • 13 years ago

    by AnorexicDream

    that is a great poem, im tryin to stop cutting too.

  • 12 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Ari, that was shockingly refreshing...I have long been away from the knife, but the detail, it's def. touching!! Thanks for your comment earlier! I felt inclined to read some of your work, and this poem just hit me pretty hard!! Thanks for sharing!!


  • 12 years ago

    by mkhoviyeun

    great poem! u're a great writter! 25/5!

  • 12 years ago

    by .


    This is a really good poem! 5/5 It was Great! Keep it up girl you have a gift! I really like all of your poems!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Torn

    really good...i know exactly what you mean!!
    keep writing...*hugs*

  • 12 years ago

    by Lemma

    I love this poem, this sounds really stupid but the title is great! My fave bits are:
    I'm ready to end the pain
    Without you in my hand
    I'm a fighter, I will live
    Because I know I can

    Pretty little knife
    Glisten your last smile
    The brain's repairing what you've snapped
    And it's all definitely worthwhile.

    GREAT wirte 6/5!!!

    Em xx

  • 12 years ago

    by Jessica V Loves U

    Omg this is a great poem! I love it! 5/5
    I missed you so much girl! I haven't been around cuz they suspened me from the website so now I'm back! I was looking for name and I couldn't find it so I lokked at the members from the club and I saw yours and I was so happy! I'm sorry that I broke my promise of always being here for you but i was trying so hard to get back here. Well i missed you girl! w/b/s

  • 12 years ago

    by Atomic

    What the? Is this true?! My ex wife writes effing good?! Haha, I absolutely heart it!

    My favourite lines:
    "I'm ready to end the pain
    Without you in my hand
    I'm a fighter, I will live
    Because I know I can"

    My thoughts while reading this:

    "Where the Hell did she get the material?! I wonder if Anthony has anymore cookies"

    ( )_( )
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 12 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    I am giving all my friends a comment before I got to sleep, I love this poem and I can relate to it so well. Wonderful job hun.
    Well, I'm off. Night. =)

  • 12 years ago

    by *kAnDiE*

    I love this! it ROCKS!! but whats up??