that was really good!! i liked it.

Good poem! 5

very well writen it was really good hope to read more soon
Bianca

Well written, is it dedicated to anyone in particular? I liked the flow of it. I don't usually like love poems but this one made the list of mighty grand ones! The last line is mighty beautiful my friend!

Good use of words too!

-Lyd

Thanx Thanx

I absolutely adore this poem!! i love it love it love lol...i kno i say that a lot dont I?? well i just cant help it...make sure to look for all of my other comments =] ive commented on all your poems ive read so far and im almost finished =[ that makes me a lil sad kuz ur poems are just great and i cant stop reading them...

~Sandra~