Dear Wolf (Eintou)

by †JustAri†   Aug 3, 2005


Dear Wolf
Don't cry aloud
For the moon has lost light
Only call for another night
That smile on your black lips
Will show me you'll
Be ok

*This is one of my practice poems...i don't like it as much as my others, but i want to say this as it's the lesson attatched to this piece: Don't stick the negatives when you are lost, just find any positive at all and smile. Life is beautiful, and this beautiful gift shouldn't be wasted with our negativity....

© Copyright Ariana 2003-2005

Eintou:
African American style poetry.
Line 1 - 2 syllables
Line 2 - 4 syllables
Line 3 - 6 syllables
Line 4 - 8 syllables
Line 5 - 6 syllables
Line 6 - 4 syllables
Line 7 - 2 syllables

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    i like this one, it may have been one of your practice ones but i think i like this one better then your other ones with your new styles. beautiful job and it's nice seeing your branch out and trying new things.

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs and love and you know the rest~

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    Good job! I checked out some of your work. I can't believe that you're only 13 years old. What remarkable talent you have!

    Keep up the good work!
    JJ

    (PS. what's it like there in Georgia? I have a whole bunch of family somewhere over there but sadly I've never even been to the place. *wonders*)

  • 18 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    wisdom beyond your years my dear. very beautiful and i'm glad you seem to want to branch out to other aspects in poetry. very nice.
    -A

  • 18 years ago

    by A.Hill

    i love these poems!!
    love alwayz
    angie

  • 18 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    I'm starting to like these. :D Very creative, and they seem to always bring out interesting lines. - beautifully done. :)

    Just to tell yah, i'm off to Australia tonight so i won't be on for a few weeks. I'll miss you and i'll miss reading your work. So take care hun.

    Love always and forever.
    <333
    -Kals.

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