ilu...aww.... muah =)

BEAUTIFUL! GREAT JOB! 5!

it is a great idea but theflow and the rhyming shceme are a lil off..

good luck next time.

great job!!! i love it, one of the best ive read!!! 5/5

really nice poem so unique you have nice topics to write about and the way you express yourself is amazing i love it nice job!

Very creative and unique! I like your style well thoughtout and very well written. The flow and subject was great! Take Care! Brooke~

wow i liked this one a lot....very moving..nice job...5/5 luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Interesting that you have choose a butterfly and a good poem that flows well thank you very much for the comment!

take care

I really like this, it's a different kind of poem which makes it even better.
You've put some good ideas into it.
Well Done.

<3 Charli XxX

I really like this, it's a different kind of poem which makes it even better.
You've put some good ideas into it.
Well Done.

<3 Charli XxX

dat was very deep n emotional

That was different, but I really liked it. You did a wonderful job. Take care.
><> Kiesha

omg that is soooo sad but great poem!!!!!!
~lotta luv~
~britty~

This was good, it was sorta hard to read for me but It was still a very good poem.

x)

i see i already commented on this poem, but I stick to what i said both times X)

it was pretty good, it flowed nicely and i see what you're saying! great job! 5/5

WoW....that was soooo sad and sooooo beautiful. i like it. it was GREAT!!! =) well anways keep up the good work 5/5. if you can will you read some of mine and comment!!!=)

I gave it a 4/5. I really like the meaning of it but there were a few times i got lost and had to start over. But over all i really liked it.

WOW! This was beautiful. Very well writtin. I loved this stanza:
"But what is the butterfly,
without it's wings,
all it's beauty,
gone"

Wonderful job!
~*hAiLy*~

This is a beautiful poem...especially the meaning to this goes deep as a person crippled with suffering... wow !
im in awe of this poem
5/5
amy