Comments : Where Did You Go?

  • 13 years ago

    by Natalie84

    HAHAHA It seemed so serious! I knew it was going to be funny as it's in the funny category but ....well....that's just funny! It really was so beautifully written...until the last sentence of course. lol .....Very good!! It flowed perfectly and had a great twist! A happy twist I'd say...;)

  • 13 years ago

    by Britney

    hehe very cute/funny. I loved the ending tho it was a surprise one lol, and different is a good thing sometimes! But anyways great job keep up the great work. 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    At first I thought it was sad and then the ending was great! LMAO~ Loved it! I have written a new one a bit different than my usual sad and dark poems. It's called My Sole Inspiration. Take Care! Brooke~

  • 13 years ago

    by NannO

    umm... i din reli think it that funny.. but ur rhyme was gud and the flow was gr8.. i loved ur expression..
    keep it up .. thumbs up 4 a first time :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Synyster

    Made me laugh. I like it.

  • 13 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    that was great! you got me laughing out loud, wich i rarely do from reading. the ryming scheme was quite cunning, good job.5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by mandieD

    thought this was really funny...wasnt expectin that last line lol

  • 13 years ago

    by clickityclack

    lol nice. ur a pretty good writer. keep it up.

  • 13 years ago

    by Nicholle

    haha this was a funny and good poem

    your a ho3 =P j/k

  • 13 years ago

    by LindaPham

    Hey great job i loved the twist at the end lol...
    -take care

  • 13 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    HAHAHA! Nice twist to it! Keep it up! 5/5

    Much Love

  • 13 years ago

    by Montia

    Your poem is mad nice.its hot.keep up the good work

  • 13 years ago

    by Stacinator

    Excellent poem! It got me at the end, i was like "awww" and then.. "oh hahahaha" :P 5!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Angel

    I really thought it was serious then had a great laugh when i got to the end! So Good!!

    Angel XX

  • 13 years ago

    by Kittie

    Great Ending I really was wondering why it was under funny, I got at the end, Keep it up!

  • 13 years ago

    by John Vlight

    Lmao...veru nice 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Carmen

    Interesting to say the least.

  • 12 years ago

    by Atomic

    Haha...I remember reading this a while ago, but I was too lazy to comment or vote.

    Psst...I think God is making me pay by reading your poems. =)

    This poem was very serious in the beginning and then you lighten the mood was the last line. Made me laughed a second time, so you're worth this comment.

    ( )_( )
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 12 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Hahahaz. . .* That's great! I love it! I started to read it and I was wondering why it was in tyhe humor section but now I see! Great job! You are an ExCeLlEnT writter!


  • 12 years ago

    by Joy

    Haha verry cute ending...I would've probably added a couple more stanzas though to build suspense but great job otherwise. 4/5