Comments : The young girl and the teacher

  • 12 years ago

    by IWroteYouAPoemOnMyWrist

    i love it like i love you, my love!

  • 12 years ago

    by Fighter

    awww hun, that's amazing!!! i love when you say

    "the teacher looked on with tears in her eye
    and then the young girl looked up at her
    and said "daddy wants me to die"

    ...that was so sad. keep up the great work!
    -xXx-

  • 12 years ago

    by Justin

    thats the longest poem I ever read but it has to be the best, I liked it alot, i thought it was very good and very sad, you are extremely talented, good job, 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by CHOKE

    OMiGoSh HuN! tHiS pOeM wAs ToTaLlY aWeSoMe! I aLmOsT cRiEd! ThIs PoEm WaS a ReAl TeAr-JeRkER! NeWaYz 5/5 On ThIs BrIlLiAnT mAsTeRpIeCe!!
    -eLiZaBeTh-

  • 12 years ago

    by Kristen

    WOOOOOOOOOOO that was freaky but it was really i mean really really good poem. its really sad if u need sum1 to talk to u can talk to me.
    kristen

  • I like it too..it is very good..great job..check out my poems when u can..please..great job again...5/5...

    xoxoxoxoxoxoxo,
    Crystal

  • 12 years ago

    by Joey P

    WOW this is one of the deepest poems I every read. I was enjoyable from beginning to end.

    God Bless

  • 12 years ago

    by Triumph

    Nice poem, keep up the good writing! Kinda long thou. :x

  • 12 years ago

    by Heather Blakley

    Gawd I cried when I read that. Gawd I hope that never happens to anyone. Keep up the good work, I'm giving you a 5.

  • 12 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    Wow that gave me the chills...i sure hope it's not a true story..though i'm positive things like that have happened. anyways, this is a great poem i give it 5/5, keep it up!
    Christina

  • 12 years ago

    by LostANDConfused

    5/5
    I LOVE IT!!! It it is just awesome. You are right too people should believe it when someone tells them something and they have proof like that. It ends up like this most of the times because some people out there just don't believe people ecspecially kids. I feel sorry for this little girl in this poem. The teacher was so nice to her and she made that girl the center of her world and then it all got ripped away....so sad....tear jerker alight.

    Keep it up. You're a great poet.

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsi

    Great job!! Very sad poem!! Very good point/message tho..ppl should always pretend that they are speaking to a person as if they will never see them again. Great job!! Keep writing!! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Mandee

    Hey i really likde your poem good job 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    Wow this is a wonderful poem
    sooo sad
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by LonelyNightsHurt

    Its good
    well written

  • 12 years ago

    by LonelyNightsHurt

    Its good
    well written

  • 12 years ago

    by LonelyForEver

    That was a GREAT poem. It was worth reading even though it was long. that is a favorite now. you are right about police not believing at times. you used truth in it. which is good. that was great.

  • 12 years ago

    by Tamra

    That was amazing and so sad. I liked it a lot.There were some grammar mistaked in there. I just think you should know that but overall it was and awesome poem and you should keep writing.

  • 12 years ago

    by ~%#*Dani*#%~

    That was GREAT i am not going to steal it but i am going to print it off thank you

  • 12 years ago

    by holly

    This poem is so good it is really sad but has a very important message
    5/5
    take care

    holly