Comments : My 2 Boyfriends

  • 12 years ago

    by Elvira

    Isnt love a crazy thing.....i kow how you feel here

  • 12 years ago

    by Marta

    That was a really good poem, you described your feelings well! keep on writing and thank you for your comment :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Jorge

    Very good i wish i could say more but i havent been in that situation

  • 12 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    Oh that was AWESOME!! the emotion was there and i can tell how you feel even without being in your situation! and it amazes me you rhymed with every 2 lines and made it still sound awesome, that takes talent!! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Amazing pome love the flow. but are your sure that this other guy is was you want do you know him well enought to give up the one your with make sure you will be happy wiht you choice before you do somthing you might regret 5.5

  • 12 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Amazing pome love the flow. but are your sure that this other guy is was you want do you know him well enought to give up the one your with make sure you will be happy wiht you choice before you do somthing you might regret 5.5

  • 12 years ago

    by estefani

    This poem is great i totoaly relate to it 100% i go trough that all the time. but never have to words to express my self good job A+

  • 12 years ago

    by wendy

    Sweet so sweet

  • 12 years ago

    by Lenny

    Thats soo sweet i think that is a great poem that only you could understand the true meaning of -well done :)

  • 12 years ago

    by fallentears

    Amazing poem xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by M MEM

    Ahh what a choice. very good. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Drew Gold

    Seems like the poem's name should be my 2 boyfriends minus one.. lol j/p.. good job.. rich with feeling.. i saw a few errors in spelling, but i usually leave those crits out cuz i feel like im nit picking,.. poetry isnt about spelling, its about feeling.. anyway.. the rhyme and flow was pretty good.. but(mainly the last 2 lines of this stanza) kinda had me fumbling with the flow..

    We're sitting in my car
    I Play a song on my guitar
    "Heaven" your favorite one
    That night my heart you won

    now that i think about it, it may just be in my head.. whoo knows.. just something for you to think about.. just my thoughts.. take em or leave em.. good piece.. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by EoB

    Svensk? Stilig!

    Anyways...(I do not know to what extent you understand Norwegian=) The poem is good enough...

    Certainly a story which we all have been through, for better or worse...It has a nice flow, and a pretty cool rhyming scheme...

    What I didn't like was the rhymes..some of them seemed really forced, which ruins the flow to a quite big extent...

    except from that, good poem..

    peace

  • 12 years ago

    by katie!

    That was a sweet, emotional poem..

    I wish you the best of luck with the person whom you love, try to let your boyfriend down gently though, so he doesnt resent you..

    Your poem conveyed your feelings and emotions for this person, he is certainly lucky to have someone care so much, good luck once again

    take care
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    I donno what to say...it was perfect! one off line, that's all, 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by SweetSuicide

    Great poem..5/5 isnt love crazy

  • 12 years ago

    by happy days

    I dont normally read love poems, but this was really good, there was alot of emotion and the flow was good. keep it up xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Excellent write. Very nice job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Andrea

    I never read a poem about somebody that has 2 boyfriends...nice! good rhyming, you didnt try to force and words to rhyme. awesome job

  • 12 years ago

    by Kayla

    Flow is a bit off but other then that nice job...keep t up...luv yas mwah

    -kayla-