Forever Empty

by Shatter   Sep 18, 2005


My soul is empty
and i am weak
don't you see the tears that i weep
can't go on
can't live like this
i'm just waiting for deaths empty kiss
singing myself to sleep
ignoring the havoc that life reeks
just seeing the days pass by
passing by before my eyes
i seem always quiet
but inside i scream
i want to wake up from this empty dream
my soul will forever be empty

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  • 17 years ago

    by shattered and broken

    Very good flow, I liked it. It was meaningful to me and I don't find many meaningful things anymore. Keep writing.
    Always-
    Shattered and Broken

  • 17 years ago

    by Mattyz Broken Angel

    This is great, Theres so much emotion in it. Keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Great way to describe loneliness, and emptiness. thanks for ur comments! Jpoet*

  • 18 years ago

    by The Crow

    This is my fav one of ur poems

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