You make me fly

by Bradley Peter   Sep 18, 2005

Kirsty i love you so
i don't even have to try
but you probably already know
and that's why you make me fly

you are my earth and my sun
and you know that's no lie
without you there's no fun
and that's why you make me fly

more and more i feel your love
it takes me up to the sky
pass the heavens and way above
and that's why you make me fly

you were made by an angel's hands
so proud that you made him cry
me and you have hopes and plans
and that's why you make me fly

together we'll follow our dreams
we'll be aiming high
held together at the seams
and that's why you make me fly

you are my one and my only
the one who does apply
without you I'd be lonely
and that's why you make me fly


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  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    Awww, so sweet. I remember my high school days with this.

    • 1 year ago

      by Bradley Peter

      Thank you, Mel. These early poems are hard to read for me. They're so sickly and fantasied. Nothing like how real love is

  • 13 years ago

    by foreverISgone

    Good poem wish i was still with my u deserve a 5/5 good job

  • 13 years ago

    by obsessedgurl

    I especially liked your use of reptition, that (in my opinion) makes a poem really good!
    anyway, i can tell you have alot of talent, so keep it up!

  • 13 years ago

    by .tiana ღ laura.

    . . . b e a u tiful *

  • 13 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    This is such a wondeful and sweet declaration to your girlfriend. I loved the repeating verse that you used throughout. Very well written I truly enjoyed it. And thank you for the comment on my poem. It really meant alot to me:)

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