Comments : You make me fly

  • 12 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Hey,,,just wanna let you know that its a great and nice poem. good job, and keep it up! 5/5 take care...really great poem, flow went well...nice.

  • 12 years ago

    by MissSideways

    Aww thats so cute man. what a lucky girl.. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by lexx

    Wow. This is a really good poem. It's very deep and has a lot of emotions to it. Thanks for commenting on my 9-11 poem, check out my other ones. Keep writing!

  • 12 years ago

    by Jaime

    "you were made by an angel's hands
    so proud that you made him cry"

    My favourite lines^. Bradley that is truly a beautiful poem, very sweet. There was a lot of thought put into this, I'm sure, to make it rhyme the way it did. I would tell you to treat her good, but I'm sure you already do.
    ~Jaime

  • 12 years ago

    by Clown

    I didnt see you has a loving dude, so yeah, good poem man

  • 12 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    This is such a wondeful and sweet declaration to your girlfriend. I loved the repeating verse that you used throughout. Very well written I truly enjoyed it. And thank you for the comment on my poem. It really meant alot to me:)

  • 12 years ago

    by .tiana ღ laura.

    . . . b e a u tiful *

  • 11 years ago

    by obsessedgurl

    I especially liked your use of reptition, that (in my opinion) makes a poem really good!
    anyway, i can tell you have alot of talent, so keep it up!

  • 11 years ago

    by foreverISgone

    Good poem wish i was still with my gal...lol..but u deserve a 5/5 good job

  • 4 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Awww, so sweet. I remember my high school days with this.

    • 4 months ago

      by Bradley Peter

      Thank you, Mel. These early poems are hard to read for me. They're so sickly and fantasied. Nothing like how real love is