Comments : From The One I Adore...

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura Ash

    Beautiful poem! =]

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    U r just really trying to be better then me, huh, Well Good Poem, i might have to write one myself...Goood Poem Though, Maybe We can go do that stuff sometime :P lol

  • Dam good a** poem so cute

  • 18 years ago

    by Puerto_Rican_Chick

    YoNess!!!
    HotNess poem!!!

    if you go to brownpride.com you can go to the poetry forum (sp)? and they go all out for shit like this. you'd 4X as many coments as you do here and the people are awesome.
    the site is flodded with Mexicanos,Chicanos, Latinas, chinos, ect. im saying this cause some people dont like that kinda site with hispanics... i hate rasist people like....

    10,987 X 45,987,092 - 1 + 675,888,666,948,000,123 X alot of other numbers

    i dont know... maybe you might like the site so just check it out.

  • 18 years ago

    by CE

    Good poem, but at 14????

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    You two are so freakin cute!! I wish my boyfriend would write me poems like yours does!! This is an excellent poem!! Great job sweetie..

  • 18 years ago

    by obsessedgurl

    Absolutly beautiful! I love this!

  • 17 years ago

    by Hey Brittknee

    Aww sweetie u are so awesome~ love always~ ur britt