((And Then))Lights Out*Bedtime

by Jamie   Oct 5, 2005


Im home alone and im scared!!! this isnt a great poem and the ending you may not be fond of but i like it i think it ends this very well because we all know how it goes...or should anyways.

i need help with a title though

Look out the window
Youll see a face
Vocal chords crown
Can't stay in this place

Hes out to get you
Tear your flesh apart
Hes looking to mend
His broken heart

Psychotic and disturbed
He stalks the grounds
He's confident and twisted
As he makes his nightly rounds

The door knob rattles
Could it be the wind?
Sure you can believe that
But you know its him

Turn on the T.V.
But youre still alone
It rings and you scream
Calm down its just the phone

Too scared to answer
You run to your room
Just waiting and ready
For him to consume

He never comes
But the noise never stops
Sleep is a stranger
The anxiety never drops

And then.

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  • 12 years ago

    by SSSAAMMMYY

    Nice poem! Keep it up!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashlee Nicole

    I think you should title it ...
    Whispers In The Dark ????? Yes No Maybe So??? I kinda like that...lol...
    Anyways...5/5
    ttyl
    Ash

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashlee Nicole

    5/5....You have such a creative way.....I'm still making someof it out in my head...But I LOVE your style girl...Awesome...

  • 12 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Amazing job. i have some of my poems that just end like that i should put them up on here. but i love poems endings like that because you don't know what happened next and you can draw your own conclusion which is great. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.
    Ps thanks for the comments.

  • 12 years ago

    by TragicRomance

    Awsome dark poems hun! I loved it! It was ver original and I loved it!