My warning

by ..eliSa*   Oct 5, 2005


Why does love have to be so painful?
Why does it always end in hate?
Love is so unpredictable,
I guess that's why we call it fate.

Why should men be so deserving,
Of girls like you and I?
Men treat us as if we have no feelings,
They break your heart and watch you cry.

They tell you that they love you,
But really they don't care.
Then they tell you they don't need you.
Love is so unfair.

I told you that you were always on my mind,
And that I needed you.
You told me I was wasting my time,
And there was nothing I could do.

Maybe I am wasting me time,
Writing this poem about you being so cruel,
But then again I'm warning my girls
To stay away from guys like you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by eric

    Amazing poem...soo much feeling great job :) 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by broken hearted me

    I really liked this poem....it is so true!!! thanx for commenting on my poems i will continue to do the same for you!!! keep up the good work!!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Carrie

    Awwww love the last lines. love love love it. times 1000000000.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lanibugz

    Great poem aint it the trueth anyhoo 5.5 great job
    lanibugz