Comments : I fell in love with you

  • 12 years ago

    by Shyguy

    I fell in love with a girl and she never notices it

  • 12 years ago

    by Cassidy

    Hun this is really good. It has alot of feelings in it. I really like it alot.

    Keep up the good work, Your doing great

  • 12 years ago

    by Juls

    Aww..thats sooo good and so true. I love it hun. I would love to see more of ur work on here!! Tell me when u have more stuff up cause I want to read it!!

  • 12 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Omg dis is soooo gwd ......i loved reading this poem so mch coz i reali no wat yr going through its reali sweet n gwd n briliant poem...but anyway keep it up hun..luv ya
    luv dia mwa xoxox tc

  • 12 years ago

    by tinkerbell

    Love it its good i give it a 5

  • 12 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    Wow...awesome poem....the flow got a little choppy in some parts, but was good most of the time...and i love this poem...i've felt like this a time or two and it's not fun....well, the painful part isn't =P....goodluck with everything and keep on writing =) *hugs*

    -brittnay- ((5/5))

  • 12 years ago

    by teresa

    Yes i feel like that with someone i love ur poem its what i feel right now you did so great one that.

  • 12 years ago

    by Choti

    Yea i agree with eveyrone else. this is very very gud. i loved it. it was sad. and i know how u feel however. i love this one guy, to the world he is just one person, but to one person, me, he is the world. and we used to be bff but alot has chnged. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by XxXKristie MarieXxX

    Wow i love it i give it 5/5 also...

  • 12 years ago

    by Paula

    Wow seriously, his made me catch my breath it is really beautiful

  • 12 years ago

    by love2beloved(chels)

    Wow, thats a really beautiful poem. I absolutely love it. Keep wrting poems, and I'll keep rating. 8-)

  • 12 years ago

    by Fay

    Yeh i know how u feel, bcoz ive felt the exact same way, ur poems r excellent, they r very emotional and moving ;)

  • 12 years ago

    by Fluffy

    Awww, that was such a sweet poem Shyguy. I particularly like the fourth stanza, very well written.

    Much love and God bless,

  • 12 years ago

    by Sunshine 8D

    Aww! thats soo cute! its soo sad too! i luv it!

  • 12 years ago

    by Impulsive Victoria

    Good job buddy!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Randi

    Wow i loved it . great poem

  • 12 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Love has a deadly pain.

  • 11 years ago

    by Swe3t 16

    Awwww that's such a cute poem babe,
    you are such a good writer Can't wait to read more of you poems,
    love Swe3t 16