I fell in love with a girl and she never notices it

Hun this is really good. It has alot of feelings in it. I really like it alot.

Keep up the good work, Your doing great

Aww..thats sooo good and so true. I love it hun. I would love to see more of ur work on here!! Tell me when u have more stuff up cause I want to read it!!
Juls

Omg dis is soooo gwd ......i loved reading this poem so mch coz i reali no wat yr going through its reali sweet n gwd n briliant poem...but anyway keep it up hun..luv ya
luv dia mwa xoxox tc

Love it its good i give it a 5

Wow...awesome poem....the flow got a little choppy in some parts, but was good most of the time...and i love this poem...i've felt like this a time or two and it's not fun....well, the painful part isn't =P....goodluck with everything and keep on writing =) *hugs*

-brittnay- ((5/5))

Yes i feel like that with someone i love ur poem its what i feel right now you did so great one that.

Yea i agree with eveyrone else. this is very very gud. i loved it. it was sad. and i know how u feel however. i love this one guy, to the world he is just one person, but to one person, me, he is the world. and we used to be bff but alot has chnged. 5/5

Wow i love it i give it 5/5 also...

Wow seriously, his made me catch my breath it is really beautiful

Wow, thats a really beautiful poem. I absolutely love it. Keep wrting poems, and I'll keep rating. 8-)

Yeh i know how u feel, bcoz ive felt the exact same way, ur poems r excellent, they r very emotional and moving ;)

Awww, that was such a sweet poem Shyguy. I particularly like the fourth stanza, very well written.

Much love and God bless,
FalLEn*-

Aww! thats soo cute! its soo sad too! i luv it!

Good job buddy!!!

Wow i loved it . great poem

Love has a deadly pain.

Awwww that's such a cute poem babe,
you are such a good writer Can't wait to read more of you poems,
love Swe3t 16
xxxxx