Comments : A Count Ant

  • 11 years ago

    by Kevin

    I get drained quite a lot talking to certain kinds of people. This is about the energetic cost of everything in a philisophical setting.

  • I liked this, it's different and seems personal.
    You've used a good choice of words.
    5/5

    xxx cici xxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Shelby Bridges

    I love reading this type of poetry and
    you do it so well...Very well written..

    Shelby

  • 11 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    It was good but i didn't like the way in which you closed the poem.Am i right?

  • 11 years ago

    by Batscout

    Your poem was creative and expressed a philosophical look at life and the way we human beings, in our various roles in life, moving within it. I enjoyed reading it.

  • 10 years ago

    by lashes

    I'm always emotionaly skint these days

  • 10 years ago

    by Mo

    Shhhh! Dont tell Mr Brown about this - he'll find a way to tax us on our thoughts and emotions! :)

    I must be thinking and feeling way too much lately - Im feeling exhausted. I wonder when my dividend will arrive for my efforts?

  • 10 years ago

    by Mo

    Oh... I didn't realise I had already read this one (and commented)... funny that cause this time around I read it differently to what I must have got out of it last time around.

    More like a prostitution of life - everything gained comes at a price, a cost in life where everything must remain in the balance.

    It was better the second time around. Cheers big ears.

    Mo

  • 10 years ago

    by Deana

    I think I could really relate to this ,it seems like everything in life costs us something ,sometimes just in energy,it reminded me of how tired I get sometimes just trying to be there for people who depend on me.I liked this a lot Kevin.

  • 9 years ago

    by serendipitee

    Love the word play of the title. I don't necessarily think it fits with the context but it did make me giggle. I do however love the unusual imagery and awesome metaphor. My favorite perhaps, "hospital waiting for birth or death"

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I hope to learn to hold a flow and mantain this depth to attract a more sophisticated audience

  • 6 years ago

    by Sean

    Dude, your on the wrong site :P. Loved it mate. Dare say your style is v.british

  • 4 years ago

    by Lemon

    I love the title, very clever!