Wow. That. Was. Amazing! It all seemed so complex, jumping from one thing to another... yet you somehow got it to fit together as one, fantastic, poem. You have loads of talent! You better keep writing more, you're one of the best poets on this site. Full points.

_______________________________Matt___________

Ha! see, i keep telling you you're the best poet, and now some one else agrees too! you are brill! this is very strange but very brill. :D how fabbo. you are brill too. go write more.

madfriliscious

If anyone else wants to know, this poem is about going mad and then commiting suicide. cheerfu huh? if you read it with that in mind you can pick up all the clues and stuff. im sorry tis soo cryptic, i just dont like the theme of my poems to be obviously evident all the time. and ot means people can interpret it how they like. they can make the theme of the poem wat they want. hope you liked it
xxx

I love the way you play around with words and the sounds they make. The fast pace of this one is brilliant. Go Figalig!

Ol' Seamus 'potato loving' Heaney would be proud my girl :)