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Not my best work

Very good

That was sooo funny!! it had a matter of factly type of rhythm to it which made it sooo much better. good write.

That was great. Nice job of pulling politics in with a childrens story.

Hey... that was really cool. that was one of the only ones on the fun, humor section that really made me smile.

Hahahaha thanks for explaining to me what Communism is... :D lol I really like this poem, you did a great job!

Great poem. It mad me laugh. keep up the good work

It was an awesome poem seriously, I love that book. Thanks for the laugh. :D

U SUCK!

I thought it was quite funny. i liked it a lot. :)

Borring!!!

I find this poem very very ambigious in style...extremly witty. Light hearted humor with a serious subject.

I enjoyed the way you handled it, brought a smile to my face as reading it.

Kisses
Hayley

Haha......not one of your best but still good. My friend mike always talks about communism in school and it finally turned to the point where he wasn't allowed to write about it anymore or he'd get a detention.....so he started writng about bears.....

~I've loved reading your poems even though a few are beyond my intelligence they are still good.

~Retniapdoolb~

Would have made ap euro sooo much more fun