Amazing as always...u r a talented poet...I bet many says so...already..yet...I'll say it again...u hev the gift...and 1 day i will like 2 c u succeed...in the world of poetry...although u r young...u r feel of the spirit...to guide others...and u know...u r not only the angel of my darkness...but brightness as well...very nice hun...really a masterpiece...

Very good, 5/5....-xxx-

I know your hurt, but hiding won't make the pain go away. Believe me the only way to make it better is to sonfront the problem. Only then may you rest. Remember these words; May The Light Guide You, But May The Darkness Protect You.

Great Job! i can relate

Oh hunny this poem was so beautiful. It spoke out to me and made my heart cry for you because my boyfriend left me as I became a cutter and it basically killed me. I am and never will me the same again because I loved him, and he threw me away because I was tainted. It made me feel like crap and even now (several months later) I am still really struggling with the loss of the person I gave my heart to and the only person I trusted. Hunny be strong, love is still out there for the both of us.

-Tainted Mikochan

I TOTATLY UNDERSTAND HOW YOU FEEL I FEEL LIKE THAT ALL TIME IN MY LIFE

Thats a really really good poem! Keep up the good work!

U are a very talented and gifted poet. i gave u 5/5 maybe u could check out mine sometime and tell me what u think. ;) hope to hear from u soon

-faithfulserenity

This is like my favorite poem on this website!!! i like have read it every day for the past week or so!!! 5/5

I just LOVE all your poems! Way to go on this one!

I loved it! It was wonderful. I loved the rhymes and flow.
Just one thing:
"But all that has left me, no longer, no more
Your something I don't know, you've left me so sore"
I think you meant "You're" right? *wonders* hehe, just trying to help :)

Wow....lovely!

NaNa

I can relate to this words... Another amazing poem.