Cold love

by brown eyes and a melancholy smile   Nov 18, 2005


Cold love

A heart full of tears,
Silenced hopes and fears,
Sobbing heart cries love,
Stained crimson, red as blood.

Wasted love, tattered frayed,
Broken heart on display,
Despairing love, bitter sweet,
Empty days, left incomplete.

Burning light once shined bright,
Lost now, surrendered to the night,
Starless nights, all is dark,
Coldness of a broken heart.

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  • 16 years ago

    by A F

    Hey. =']
    Great Job. =']

    I Liked It. =']
    xxx.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    I like the repetition at the end, just the line 'sobbing heart cry love' do you mean crys.......lol sorry its a great read, the flow is brilliant, lovely word craft. The last line is just....brilliant.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    Thats wonderful, its really rich and creates great images and is just a wonderful poem. Great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by (*andrea*hurtinside*)

    Its awsome

  • 18 years ago

    by (*andrea*hurtinside*)

    Awwwwwww that sad but awsome 10/10 lol your really good you knoe

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