Gurl i say dis another of ur masterpeices....wel basically all ur poems are masterpieces...i gave it a 5/5....so keeep it up!
-HUGS N KISSES!

This is a great one too. I really like it! Excellent job.

Tiffany.xox.

Hey girl I have been around depressed! Yep, I know, I am stupid, but I just start writting and I feel like where do I go from here. I dont know ma...Thanks for the compliments. And girl...this poem is awesome!!!!! You are a great poet. Your heart is full of wonders!!!

I dont know why..thats the thing. I am just so confused. I feel so tired of loving...I love Fanette, the guy I am messing with and I love Rolando, my baby daddy, but its just so hard to love them. One is married and the other in jail..what kind of guys are these? you feel me? What the hell am I doing loving them. I dont know, I just expected more of myself...and now all I want is the little attention they can give me....I dont know

::MELI::

Great poem.. i really loved it and you so talented!! mwaz stephy Xxx

Ohhh I hope Miguel reads these, because they are so amazingly beautiful!! Great job!!

Wow! So much talent! Beautiful poem!

Hey girl u be writin some good poems and i can tell tha u love this boy. he must be a very good inspiratipn. U got a talent mija keep up tha good work. Much Love
-Moranda

Great job! your poems are good, i like to read them! keep writing, you have a tallent.

heidi

Hey this one was really good i liked it!
its a good a idea to put english init because i dont understand spanish...lol...wish i did!!! :(
keep it up!:)
xxx

Hey wazz up mija. I luved this shyte. I loved the way you mixed up your spanish and english. It gave the poem a lil bit of flavor. That was good that you put in the translations for people that don't know spanish. Nice one mija. Much luv. Keep them coming. Alratoz.

~La Loka~

Wow i love how you have spanish in there, i absolutely love spanish. i wish i was more fluent in it tho lol im working on it. this poem is great keep it up

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*